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Fuck I lost the whole story i was writing here....Now im mad!!
I had an old story...and was writing about zabuza's death the beginning of Tori's life and how she joined the team...
.-__-
But my oc is Tori (shadow) or Kijo (which means she-devil)
and there is Zabuza (mist)
and Haku (mist)
My old OC in new style

EDIT: lol Haku flaws on his neck! I forgot that his neck is covered >_< Total failure!!!!!


(c) Me
(c) Masashi Kishimoto


I got some of it. Hope ya like! :P well...
The story is about the kagekages daughter from the shadow village. And it all starts when Tori (5 years) are given as a gift to the mist as a peace-sign between those villages. This gift granted the mist village a strong future ninja and some scrolls from the shadow village and the mist would give Tori some mist techniques to pas over to the shadow village when she was fully grown. This gift was a future hope to team up in war or to some day be possible to make the two villages in to one big country.

As Tori grew up in the last years of the "bloody mist" her thought was that all she face is death and misery, and therefor developed a quite depressive and sad personality, but as well showing a smile on her face among people. thinking there is no good in life and believed that all ninjas where born to only face death. She stared hating her family for giving birth to her swearing that when she returns back to the shadow village she will kill her father, the kagekage (named Koutashi the thousand demon killer [link]) and the mizukage from the mist village for letting her face so much death.

Tori never trusted anyone and become and exclusive assassin in her teen years with her talent of tricking the victims of being a kind and warm hearted person before she strikes. she really knew how to look like the villages most innocent person, and everyone thought that of her.

When Tori become older her anger grew and become more visible on the outside. Making the mist people unsure about her and start talking. People started to knew her true person and therefor felt tricked and started to go against her. People feared she was faking her kindness to kill them when she gained their trust, so Tori got abandoned from the mist village and was named the Koji (the she devil).

when she got 20 she met Zabuza and Haku right after leaving the village. Zabuza thought that Tori would be in good use for missions which had much more money in it than he had been earning so far along with Haku and therefor joined the group for 4 years.
When Tori joined the team she started changing a bit again. After seeing the acting of Haku towards Zabuza and what Haku told about him, she notice all three had something in common. They where all abandoned from someone or some place. Tori actually start believing in Haku and Zabuza, trusting them and start caring about them. But even when she could show loyalty to the team she still had her talent of faking it as well to the enemy. Making you wonder when she actually is showing her real feelings.
Tori often use to talk about the meaning of life, and asking the enemy or victims what they thought was their meaning of their existence. Often answering back that their only purpose in life was to face her before their death. (which might be her personal quote )

Like in all stories, the recipe contains love... And Zabuza and Tori had a good tone and working quite well together. Haku liking Tori for being a woman and the closest he had to a mother or sister and for looking at Zabuza with the same eyes as himself. Both willingly protecting Zabuza with their life.

The last part is that after Zabuza's and Hakus death, Tori was highly pregnant. And there is a scene where Tori sits by their grave asking Zabuza about the promise he had told her. The promise to protect her and their child knowing that people would not only come after her, but if someone knew that there would be a child born from a demon, they'll also come after their child as well. Tori was too vulnerable against enemies carrying or taking care of a child when the bounty of Tori's head was sky high!

Tori gave birth to a girl named Kinpaku with purple eyes, skintone, haircolor and teeth similar to Zabuza, but with the glare and spirit like her mother Tori.
Tori feared for Kinpakus life knowing that Kisame who knew Tori and Zabuza well in the past may take Kinpaku to the akatsuki for believing that Kinpaku had special ability useful for their future monopoly war plans. Tori decided to leave her baby to a family in the mist village who stayed loyal to Zabuza, taking care of Kinpaku while Tori went off waiting for the day Kinpaku was old enough to travel with her.

Well that is about what i remembered, but Im so bad at writing...

I also had an amazing idea during the 4th shinobi war when Zabuza get resurrected. Tori and Kinpaku joins the fight and meets Zabuza and Haku. Making the scene quite emotional when Zabuza notice Kinpaku and tells her she had her fathers look and some fierce looking teeth, not actually telling Kinpaku at first that he is her father, and Kinpaku don't quite understand either until she looks at Tori crying silently while looking at Zabuza. When Kinpaku get to understand who Zabuza is, zabuza quickly tells her that she has grown to become a strong ninja if she where joining the war at her young age(12) along Tori. And telling Tori how beautiful she still look since last time. Haku smiling at Kinpaku telling her that she had a strong father. This scene isn't so long because they are all being controlled by Kabuto and they don't move until they're forced attacking. Sadly Tori have to fight Zabuza, but some how she just can't take a deadly strike on him because its Zabuza standing in front of her. Then Kakashi pushes Tori away and Naruto attacks Haku. Kinpaku fighting the other ones in the real manga and Tori lying/sitting down wounded looking in shock by Zabuza tried to kill her with his sad looking eyes.

But that scene is a bit hard to make because that's just 4 years after zabuza gets killed in the manga. So maybe I'd have to push the war 10 years in to the future and forget about Naruto and Kakashi..:P

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